Success criteria
↣Use a variety of sentence beginnings
↣Use punctuation
↣Add adjectives and verbs
↣Use a variety of sentence lengths
Cold icy wind rushes against my face, making my heartbeat rush a thousand times more with excitement.
The calm breeze somehow settles me down, I try to run up the snowy hill but the snow was so sinky like quicksand, That it is hard to run up. I fell over the chills ran down my spine.
But it didn't stop me from having all the excitement.
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