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I just couldn’t eat something snotty. Felt disgusting in my mouth it was just made with complete horror the texture was like snot and slugs mixed together all i could describe it was with the words disgusting and horror, You could tell they were in hot water for too long, That is why they probably felt like snot. But i was forced to eat it, I had to force myself to eat it too I pinched my nose closed my eyes and them opened my mouth and squish, I swallowed it as fast as i could, i could feel the stringy snotty noodles.