Hey, I am Maddi.

Hey, I am Maddi.
I go to Waikanae Primary School, Im a Year 7

Wednesday, 7 June 2017

Noodles / 100 Word Story

Success criteria
Use a variety of sentence beginnings
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs

Use a variety of sentence lengths


I just couldn’t eat something snotty. Felt disgusting in my mouth it was just made with complete horror the texture was like snot and slugs mixed together all i could describe it was with the words disgusting and horror, You could tell they were in hot water for too long, That is why they probably felt like snot. But i was forced to eat it, I had to force myself to eat it too I pinched my nose closed my eyes and them opened my mouth and squish, I swallowed it as fast as i could, i could feel the stringy snotty noodles.

Selfie Writing

Success criteria
↣Use a variety of sentence beginnings
↣Use punctuation
↣Add adjectives and verbs
Use a variety of sentence lengths

Cold icy wind rushes against my face, making my heartbeat rush a thousand times more with excitement.
The calm breeze somehow settles me down, I try to run up the snowy hill but the snow was so sinky like quicksand, That it is hard to run up. I fell over the chills ran down my spine.
But it didn't stop me from having all the excitement.
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